Teeworlds - general

what do you mean first movie

04:17

here are my criticisms:

04:17

your timing with the background music is good

04:17

but you need to work on ur cc

04:18

also some of the camera angles could be good but i think you should use them in a better way, maybe you could transition a smooth pan to new camera angles instead of abruptly switching the camera position.

04:18

otherwise its cool

04:19

as for the cc: imo too saturated, a bit hard to look at

04:19

you want the main elements to be highlighted, not everything on the screen

04:20

the dirt and sky seem too saturated/bright

04:20

definitely need less red

04:21

should also work on thumbnails. (they are important to grab attention!)

04:22

also, the animated snow added on top only works well if you have darker colors imo (edited)

@louis about cc that was experiment with bbc effects, i agree, need to find better color balance xD About camera, i used dyn to make more distance visible only for kills, about what else camera angles are u talking? About first movie i mean clean movie without any hud exactly on 0.7 ver. As i saw on yt, there was not good movies on 0.7 before (edited)

ah ok

12:59

maybe make the dyn movement more smooth? idk ho#w to explain