drops should lead somewhere but it seems like they don't really go anywhere
17:21
song was actually pretty neat until 0:22 when the pluck came in
17:21
i feel like the claps at 0:30 are too scarce and off beat tbh
17:22
claps shouldnt be on beat 1 they should be on beat 2 and/or beat 4
17:22
the whistle at the beginning has too much variation in its melody(edited)
17:23
imo if you want something to stick in ppls head it has to be simple yet good
17:24
also generally in electronic u want to have it solidly set in a key and the melody at the beginning and the stabs dont rly match
17:26
drum structure kinda messy too
17:26
too much reverb on kick imo
17:27
high pass filter or whatever it is (cant tell) at 2:15 is kinda unnecessary, you don't need too many of these in the middle of passages and also when you do, you shouldn't make them this short
17:27
and they're also kinda misplaced, should be consistent with those if you choose to use them(edited)
17:28
parts like 1:30 i think you shouldn't have just the melody
17:29
it's hard to "feel" the music if it's just the melody there imo and especially with a melody where it's hard to tell what chord you're in on each beat.
17:29
also
17:30
your chord progression is basically just g minor for the whole song
17:30
which can get suuuper boring if you're not really creative
17:30
so i'd suggest you try and experiment with other chords perhaps
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